Term 2 Week 2
W.A.L.T recall events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has a
First Draft
The Worst Day
Me, dad and mum went for a drink of water and saw lions and every step we took when the lions pounced and run after as and then my heart
Was pounding like a drum.I’ve never felt so alone,frightened or helpless
before.I could hear the lions behind me and they were getting closer and
closer.The entire pride seemed to be in the water with me tearing at me with treesharp.
Well I like how you tell us how you are and where you were and what happened. And I like how you felt when the lions jump’d on you. And that you tell how you are with your mum and dad. And how the lions got you in the lake and how you felt in the story. Describe more about what you are doing.
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