I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
The start of your DLO is set up really well. It was great to see that you had the W.A.L.T and had your pictures all ready to go before you started filming. Your next step is to think really carefully about how you solve these problems before you start recording and make sure that you really clearly explain how to solve the problem. For example, your W.A.L.T was to skip count but you didn't show us how. Keep trying, I know how hard you are trying in class.
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The start of your DLO is set up really well. It was great to see that you had the W.A.L.T and had your pictures all ready to go before you started filming. Your next step is to think really carefully about how you solve these problems before you start recording and make sure that you really clearly explain how to solve the problem. For example, your W.A.L.T was to skip count but you didn't show us how. Keep trying, I know how hard you are trying in class.
ReplyDeleteyes Mrs Mclaclan i well next time
DeleteWow Dominique I like your drawing
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