“5 4 3 2 1 Boom!! 1961 the first and ever chimpanzee was sent to
space for an experiment to save the people from cancer. I was that chimpanzee sent to space by Travis my trainer and owner. My name is Garroth.The rocket sounded like a bullet finding its victim when it took
off. The top of the rocket was as pointy as a needle me and my papa took a picture so I can remember him.”
65 years later
“I slept in a coma for 65 years and when I woke up, I realized I got old. I started to see the stars in the sky, lights, galaxies, colors. Then I saw it, the Milky Way it was rat in front of my eyes I was shaking I was
happy to land on earth.”
On earth
“When I looked out my window It was horrible. I saw the park me and Travis went to. It was destroyed. I thought that it was a dream so I slapped my face, but it wasn’t a dream. I went to my home I thought that I'd see Travis but no. I screamed my head off. I thought that I’d see Travis again but I couldn’t. I start crying because maybe I would never see him again. This never would have happened if they didn’t send me to space. No I told myself I must find Travis. I must find him and the other people so I can claim earth, so this will never
ever happen again the end…... DUN DUN DUN !!!!
That is really good Dominique. I like how you stayed in space and near the end you landed on Earth that is way different than mine. Maybe next time you can do a tiny bit more writing.
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