I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Dominique, I really like this because I really like whales and you have taught me how to help a whale if I see one on the beach. I now know that if I see a whale on a beach, then I should call a vet or a fire station because of their hoses. Next time I think you could include more facts. I also have a question, if I see a whale on a beach and I don't have a phone, what do I do? Because I can not call anyone.
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Hi Dominique, I really like this because I really like whales and you have taught me how to help a whale if I see one on the beach. I now know that if I see a whale on a beach, then I should call a vet or a fire station because of their hoses. Next time I think you could include more facts. I also have a question, if I see a whale on a beach and I don't have a phone, what do I do? Because I can not call anyone.
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