My fun trip to Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.

A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.               

My fun trip to Spencer Park

Last Friday Ako Ngatahi lined up to go to Spencer Park. Then we lined up in our class then some people got to go on the bus and in cars I went in a car with Keri. When we got there we lined up in our group numbers I was in group 2 .

First we went to the beach we made sandcastles, drew in the sand but we weren't allowed to swim in the sea and we went back to the hut for lunch

We played and played and played I mostly went on the flying fox. Me and Tya

Played tag. but you can’t touch the floor and if you did you were it. And I wanted to go on the flying fox so I did I went on the long one and then I went on the short one.  

Then we all had to come down to go on are next trip. Well group 2 went on the bird hide. But we went the wrong way. so we all sat down and had a drink some people went far away from the parent and the teacher. We had a chat and then we kept walking I felt sick but it was because I wasn't used to it but when we got back we had a snack but I was too excited eat. So I went on the flying fox all three of them.

The other groups got to go to the beach to collect treasure but my group didn’t go. That wrapped the day up and we lined up once again in our class lines and our class lined up in the year you were in. I’m a year 6 and the people who went in the cars went a again I was in the front

And the people who went with me were Gerard, Khalaynie, Shalizeh, Sage and Mereana.

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