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Tuesday, November 7, 2017

My Character description.

   Ive been working on a character named Luke Garner and he is from a book called Among the Hidden he is a shadow child and a shadow is a kid who has to had because the last child must be killed because your only aloud two kids and he has to be hidden all the time he can't go outside or go out with his family
I'm not finished yet on the other character's but here is Luke Garner 
It would be Awesome is you could give me some feedback so next time I know what to do when I post another character description.

3 comments:

  1. Hey Dominique its Ryleigh this is so cool who showed you that site i'm might try it myself :) anyway that's real cool Dominique nice work.

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  2. Hi Dominique,
    I Liked the fact how you said I think he is depressed because he is a shadow child and he wants to be a normal child. Next time can you add more and say what character traits is because someone might not know what it is and can you also explain what a shadow child is because someone probably wont know what it is. Keep up the great work Dominique.

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