Playing in the mud with my cousin
It was a Friday on my Opa’s farm but lucky it wasn’t ruining like Thursday It was pouring that day it maid so much mud. Anyways back to my story Friday afternoon Me and My cousin were playing around then we noticed the BIG puddle of mud we wanted to play in it so we could be mud monsters. So we run inside to go ask our Opa so we could play in the mud and he looked at us with a serious face then he smiled and said of course. So we run to your rooms grabbed our customs (south African word for togs) and got changed I had to wait for my cousin to finish changing Then I grabbed his arm then I run as Fast as the flash to get to that mud so I jumped in as if I was jumping into a pool. We had so many competitions we tried who could dunk their head under mud the fastest without getting mud on our faces or hair but no one won but my dad’s brother saw us and face palmed then he grabbed the kiddie pool and the hose (If he told us we had a pool we wouldn’t be in the mud) But the mud was funner but when he called me I went into mission mode try not to get clean mode so he called me he washed me off then he called Daniel my cousin while my uncle was washing me I run like flash jumped like my life depended on it just after he finished washing off Daniel he didn’t even realise that I went back into the mud. I high Fived Daniel then my uncle was confused and he forgot that he washed me off He was done washing me then Daniel but Daniel was full of mud my uncle was so confused it happened five more times then we started getting bored of it and we got hungry. I’m surprised my uncle was so confused all that time. When we were cleaned off dried then we put new clothes on then we all had dinner.
Fin
This week me and my class have been doing writing about fun holidays or fun times we have had. I hope you enjoyed my story and I hope to get some feedback bye.
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